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Rank Market Crash

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The incidents started during a routine graduation spree with the anti-examiner from the *** club.

 

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In some clubs the tumults escalated into public demotions of charlatans and into forced bleachings of extremely overrated black belts. For the purpose of mass amusement, the internet pages of the *** club were shown on huge video screens in market squares and sport arenas. Video recordings of especially decadent officials were sold underhand at top prices.

 

© 2007 UNE

 

Comment

The first sentence was substituted by a more moderate version. The article is meant to begin relatively neutral and then increase gradually. But with the above formulation, it would have started with a too poignant statement.  

 

The additional passage below was omitted because it would have slowed down the dynamics of the whole text.

 

© 2007 UNE

 

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